I loved this short story. The narration and sound effects made this one stand out.
Loved this short and sweet horror story. Great narration
Love love love
Short but great
Great enjoyable short story
awesome story, and very well narrated.
good short story, well written
dying to read more!!&&
i wish there was more to the story at the end! i got chills, and i definitely recommend this book if you like a funny feeling of suspense in your stomach!!
Loved this, narrator and music made it even more spooky!
I loved how the narrator narrated the horror, it was perfect!
Good short story. The ending could have been a bit better…it was a bit sudden but likely intentionally so. I could completely envision that in a movie short. I loved the authenticity of the narrator…that really added to the atmosphere of the story.
not bad for a short story. it was interesting.
Story was so captivating that i wished it wasn’t a short story.
Very good story.
Narration was great as well.
Great short story! Sound effects and accent make this a real treat, of horror!
Good short Horror and narrated well. Was interested in story through it and spooky ending.
Enjoyed this short story